When I Fall (Part II)
By Abduljeleel Olanrewaju (ABJ)
“I quit” echoed,
numbed my ears,
stumbled my mind.
I ain’t a loser, I snapped.
I shuffled my choices,
each coated with risks.
I riffled through silence,
feeling the rush in my veins.
I linger—but not as a quitter.
I braced myself with a laser,
fired at will—my own Caesar.
Verily, the bush is thick,
but my wisdom lights the way.
With no spear to spar,
I spare not my demons.
Life takes turns,
but you take control.
Adjust to the wave,
and taste what it gave.
alfaaedahpress
Al-Faaedah is the flagship journal of MSSN Akinyele Area Council, promoting authentic Islamic scholarship, moral leadership, student mentorship, and societal development.
Did you find this reflection beneficial?
Your feedback guides our editorial board on future essays and dispatches.
Reader Discussion (3)
A deeply insightful exploration. The balance between academic discipline and spiritual consciousness is precisely what our student body needs today.
Barakallahu feek Brother Ahmad. May Allah grant our youth steadfastness in learning and practice.
Jazakumullahu Khayran to the editorial team. The references from Surah Taha were especially grounding.
Related Perspectives & Notes
The Day Time Stopped
Alimat O. Abdulkareem The day came when the clocks still breathed. In the passing of events did my soul get sheathed.Mouths kept circling faithful paths I had w...
I'M A TREE IN THE STORM
By Adegoke Rahmah I am like a treein the middle of a stormsupported by my trunkfor God knows how long. The storm was strong,yet I say to my Lord "O Lord,I do no...
THE FUNERAL OF FEAR
ALIMAT O. ABDULKAREEM For years, it lived on borrowed minds and breath. So today, let's gather on the occasion of its death. The earth has upon it an unfriendly...